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After truly defining what a story really is was only just the beginning.  I had to make decisions that go beyond the stories representation.  However in time that has some amazing hardcore features.  And casting it into another level gains a new level of ability.  So I'm please to present Love's Carefree Nature to signify my way of appreciating the ways of building a story.

This story is recommend 16+ by the author.

Love’s Carefree Nature

By Mario A. Delgadillo

 

Within the early morning, it seems quite within the heavens.  The sunlight is barely waking up.  The youngsters are still lounging themselves at rest.  Not knowing what is going to happen next.

 

Within the center of the party palace there is a young goddess.  She isn’t the brightest of them all but her heart is as innocent as they come.  Love is a special type of gal that hasn’t quite got her rhythm yet with the other goddesses.

 

Love has a babyish face as she loves her reddish pink hair combusting all over her hair.  She is more naturally beauty that doesn’t care about her looks.  Her gorgeous dress shines with pink coloring rainbows.

 

Lately throughout the nights she hangs out peacefully with her boyfriend Hexo.  Always adoring at how much fun this god is.  He is best known for his parties from the heavens and down to the mortal world.  At most rates, this is how she would love life to be. 

 

But there is always a sense of responsibility when the party is over.  Her mom, Zela, comes to pick up her daughter.  She doesn’t like seeing her daughter with Hexo.  As Hexo is a shame towards even his own father let alone how a god should act. 

 

Zela is extremely serious.  She is dressed within her love goddess uniform.  Lifting the skies within her feet she hovers over Love and Hexo.  In stunning effect, Zela is clearly disappointed.  How many times does she have to see her daughter sleeping at Hexo’s party palace.

 

Seeing her daughter holding onto him so pleasantly is extremely disturbing to her.  She has totally forgotten that her job starts in just a few minutes again.  Her little one is totally helpless if she doesn’t watch over him.

 

Zela intrigues with a strong interactive voice, “why am I not surprise at seeing my daughter lying down like a bum?”  She flickers Love’s head with her fingers. 

 

Love slowly wakes up.  She says with a sleepy voice, “why did you hit me on head mom?”  Zela says with a serious voice, “because I’m sick of seeing my daughter wasting potential.  Intituling herself into the bonds of an unforgiving teen god.”  Zela holds her bitter anger and continues, “get up!  It is time to do your job.”

 

Love says while stretching her arms, “just because I over slept doesn’t mean I’m wasting potential.  I have been keeping myself together and I will prove it to you!”  Zela pulls on Love’s arm while saying, “its time to go Love!”  Love gets up while waving her hair.

 

Love holds onto Zela’s pull and wakes up Hexo.  He peacefully says while still trying to get himself together, “what is going on?”  Love politely says, “sorry Hexo!  I enjoyed last night together but I have to work now!” 

 

Love cheerfully kisses Hexo bye on his forehead.  She gets herself up and says, “see you soon!  Love will catch you again!”  Love gives Hexo a playful look on her face and her signature cutesy wave.

 

Zela seriously says, “stop it!  You can do way better then him!  And what have you been doing last night?  I hope that you’re not light headed.”  Love stares at her mother as she giggles with an intriguing laugh. 

 

Love felt a little light headed but she stares at her mother comfortingly.  She gives her mother a beautiful smile.  Then says with a gentle voice, “I am just a little tired from the late night.  Just seek into my lovely dub aura.”  

 

Love stares peacefully at Hexo.  She cheerfully says, “you should give Hexo a chance.  He is kind and gentle!  What more do I really want?”  Zela forces Love to face her with her left hand.  Zela says with a high interactive voice, “Hexo is a party god.  A shame towards his own father.” 

 

Zela had enough of their discussion.  With a snap of her fingers, she instantly teleports them to their destination.  Love looks around her surrounds as she sees that they are in grassy plain.  The place has a few trees implanting the entire area.

 

She sees a beautiful fresh water lake.  With the shifts of a shinning heart they form together a high sense of passion.  Seeking together the form of a shinning star, Love felt like the environment will be the perfect place to make an easy job.

 

Zela seriously says, “today you will be joining Tellix!”  Tellix is fully ready for her mission as she is already fully equipped.  But looks terribly disappointed that Love isn’t ready yet.  Tellix thinks within her mind, “Love has already let herself go!”

 

Tellix says to Love, “we need to hurry Love.  Mortals don’t wait for anything.”  Love says while running to Tellix, “I’m coming!  I’m coming!”  While running, Love changes out of dress and into her love goddess uniform. 

 

Tellix takes an impulsion look on her face.  She is serious dressing herself out in the open.  “Not to mention that your being so improper.  Getting yourself dress in front of everyone,” Tellix had to mention. 

 

Love says with a cheery voice, “I’m sorry!  That is the price for running late.  By now everyone knows what my body looks like.”  She giggles with her reactions flowing up and around in her light-headed mind. 

 

Tellix nervously, “oh dear!  Please don’t mess up own mission!”  She tries to not think about what will happen in their terms of events.  She can definitely make a mess with just one slip.  But any further situations wouldn’t represent to be childlike.

 

Love cheerfully says, “I’m not that clumsy!”  Zela insightfully says, “yes you are!  Just look at the way your feet are off balancing.”  Love notices that she is waving around her encountering steps.  Even hearing her mother’s words isn’t helping her balance.

 

Love says with a letdown voice, “oh mom!  Can’t you believe in your daughter!”  She stares at her mom with an upset glace.  Zela continues, “you maybe my precious daughter.  But there is a lot for you to learn.”

 

Love knew that she is young but a reflection like that from her mother awfully hurts.  Love quickly shakes off her clumsiness and brings her head up.  She takes a deep breath while saying, “I guess I would have to prove her myself.” 

 

Love channels her special type of goddess power.  Opening up her wings extra wide for her defining course of blooming nature.  Tellix can feel that her energy is fully natural.  She doesn’t need any help from trainers to know how to open up the goddess within her.  In fact, see is a little jealous at Love’s natural control.

 

Tellix says with a cheery voice, “well at least your game!  I can tell that your power is in full control even after taking a night party.”  Tellix says within her mind, “how does she do?  It’s like she is using pure instincts!”

 

However even with her jealousy, she takes some relief after noticing that Love is keeping some qualifying potential.  Perhaps there is a reason why Love isn’t much of work effects.  Let Tellix has second thoughts in that opinion all together.

 

Tellix says while looking around, “now where to start!”  Love passionately waits while delightfully sparkling her beauty up.  She opens up her aura and shines her make up while it spreads onto her wings.  Then her nails open up with a wave harmonizing feel.

 

Tellix points out to the squirrels while saying, “we will start with those animals!  Now how about we spread some love.”  One of the squirrels is having love trouble with another squirrel.

 

Love says with a gentle voice, “oh the poor thing!”  She gradually runs ahead while concentrating her aura.  “On it!” Love says with a heavenly voice. 

 

She thinks of a clear strategy.  Enriching the soil so that it can grow seeds from its own nourishment.  She fully develops a powerful acorn from the ground then opens it up with a heavenly shine.

 

The squirrel comes out of her shyness.  It leaps to the other squirrel with a shine of happiness.  The other squirrel quickly excepts and they dance with a cute experience.  Enlightening them all with their extinctive meanings.

 

The next couple is rabbits. Rushing through the flow of there is something unique crossing with ever corner.  They hop in around the field but one of them is definitely lacking in speed.

 

Love swifts her passionate hands to gather the insight of her light.  The male rabbit grows on extra strength to catch up with the female rabbit.  Glowing with a powerful insight they continue to bunny hop the rest of the way.

 

Tellix has finish with a couple of dogs that needed relationships to fix.  The two dogs cycle around her with all kinds of licks.  They start to fly around with a full burst of energy.  A trail of cycling energy combusts through a stream of high-density tails.

 

Tellix says while running to Love, “I may have gone a little playful on this love relationship.  But that is what the dogs ask for!”  The dogs wolf behind them with a pleasant thank you.

 

Tellix notices two humans that are sitting on the beach together.  She also notices that the two don’t know how to speak with each other.  Tellix says within her mind, “oh my!  Now we have someone that would complete a goal.”

 

 Tellix engages with Love, “now how about we try some more intelligent being.”  Love says with a carefree voice, “they really need a lot of help.  Humans definitely need a push for their hearts to sparkle.” 

 

The two of them are both girls and they engage with a fabulous shine for each other.  Soon enough they encounter a perfecting charm that experiences the rightful guiding place overs. 

 

Tellix engages the female dressed up like a boy while Love engages with the girly girl.

 

Tellix says with a engaging voice, “hello there!  It seems that you’re in a rough place.”  Love cheerfully says, “how are you doing today!  Such a bright sunny day.” 

 

The two girls feel like a little bit surprise at them.  But Tellix and Love use their heart charms to relax the girls.  The defining energy around the field is design to bring a romantic field together.

 

Love intrigues, “how about the two of you?  What is it that you have special each other?”  The girly girl says with a surprise voice, “what makes you say that?”  The tomboy insists, “are you nervous about me.” 

 

Tellix says with a cheery voice, “your partner is nervous too!”  The girly girl says with a nervous voice, “I really didn’t know!  You don’t show any resistance in your behavior.”  The tomboy says, “that’s because I need to be the strong one within our relationship.”

 

At this moment, Tellix and Love use their heart charms to give their hearts an opening push.  Love engages, “why don’t you be interactive with your true hearts now.”

 

The girly girl says with a nervous voice, “with the two of you here.”  Tellix says, “Just imagine yourselves as the only one here.  Were completely irrelevant.”  The tomboy girl holds the girly girl’s hands and beautifully says, “you’re the one that truly opens my heart.” 

 

The girly girl starts to blush.  “Oh, how I feel the same way,” the girly girl says.  Love and Tellix step out of the way.  But they take one last look to make sure nothing goes wrong. 

 

Tellix says with a grateful voice, “you did great!  If it is worth saying, you convinced me that you’re going to make an amazing love goddess.  Let me guess!  Your mother is more upset at you dating Hexo.”

 

Love interacts with a faint smile.  Tellix holds onto Love’s hands while saying with pleasant voice, “listen Love!  Your mother just wants to make you perfect.  But you’re not one that cares about high standers.”

 

Love shows a convincing face.  Her heart feels a little set off with over the top emotions.  Tellix reaches Love even closer while continuing, “You are only a love goddess because it’s your mother’s legacy.  Other than that.  You are just a calm peaceful gal that is naturally carefree!” 

 

Love feels all of the lovely emotions streaming up her heart.  Love hugs Tellix while saying, “I appreciate all of your darling accomplishments.  Your generous kindness shows that you will be leading the way towards another carefree wave of reflections.” 

 

Tellix believes that Love should be deeply rewarded.  Tellix gratefully says, “Love!  Next Tuesday the goddesses are going to have a girl’s night.  It would be amazing if you come.”  Love intrigues, “I love too!  Hanging out with the girls is just what I need!” 

 

Suddenly Zela says with a serious voice, “Love!  Don’t make me wait for you.  Your already done with the mission.  Now let’s get going!”  Love skips backwards from her mother’s fierce interaction.  Then says, “I better not keep mom waiting.” 

 

Tellix teases, “ya!  She is too ruff on the edges.”  Tellix thinks for a moment of how here mother wouldn’t leave her alone before.  From any mother they keep an I on their child.  Some more loosely then others.

 

As soon as the daughter comes back to the mother, Love and Zela head back home.  Zela says with a serious voice, “you did average.  But you do realize that you will have to do better.” 

 

Love says with an intertwining voice, “I have used my skills towards a high achieving values of strength.  I don’t know about you but I show intense abilities within my strength of contactable goals.”

 

Zela isn’t listening as she doesn’t even face her daughter.  Love says within her mind, “unbelievable!  She is still not being presentable with her own daughter.”  Love swifts her body to face her mother.

 

Love demandingly says, “look mom!  I’m not going to be your perfect little goddess.  I don’t engage myself with my work as much as you do.  This isn’t my true perspective.  I’m sorry mom!  But your little girl can become a love goddess and just hang around in the pleasant side.”

 

Zela doesn’t know what to say.  She is totally speechless.  Everything within her aura is intensely dynamic.  The two of them stance at a high trace of realms away from each other even though they are face to face. 

 

“And as for my boyfriend.  Don’t hate him because he is a lazy party god.  Let me remind you that us from the devil king’s daughter,” Love dynamically appreciates.  “By engaging his lazy self to trick his mischief playouts.  His performance is so lousy that it clearly shaken up his father,” Zela yells intensively.

 

Just then Hexo yells outside, “Love!  My darling Love!”  I can feel that beautiful presence from anywhere.”  “Speak of the immortal,” Zela intertwines.  Love and Zela stare down their window.  Zela stares at Love as she is engaging with Hexo’s lovely dub eyes.

 

Zela sees that Hexo is completely wonky donkey from all of his partying.  Is he ever in his right mind?  Love says with an adorable voice, “hello my Hexie!  I’m so glade to see your nicely intriguing self.”  Hexo says with a cheery voice, “my Love!  Take this with you!”

 

Hexo throughs a special necklace to Love.  Love catches it and has a lovely look on her face.  She pleasantly says, “this look so lovely!  I will cherish it like a precious charm.”

 

Zela has her teeth grinding at such a sight.  Seeing her daughter completely flattering over him like a connective doll face.  She shouts out loud to Hexo, “get out of here!” 

 

Zela blasts Hexo into the air.  Love says with a sappy voice, “good bye Hexie!” Just then she realizes what her mother has done.  The way she sent him into the sky is a little overboard.

 

Love turns over to her mother, “oh mommy that is rude.  Do you even care about my feelings?”  Zela has a shock look on her face.  Her daughter has grown really fussy lately.

 

She jumps straight out of the window as her mother tries to catch the girl.  After landing on the ground, Zela says, “Love are you really doing this?  Are you really going after him?” 

 

Love says with a cheery voice, “you know mother!  There are some priorities that matter a lot more than you think.  Like I said before.  He is kind and sweet!  There is nothing more than I ever wanted.”  Love flies after Hexo as Zela says, “where did I go wrong with my daughter?”

 

The End

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